As I'm writing this, the pitch only has about 9 pages up, but it's still enough to make me want more and wait eagerly to see what happens next. I'd like to thank Crackwalker for pointing me in its direction.

The short of it is this: in the future, some people exhibit incredible powers. The Imperium takes control of these people and exploit them for the advancement of human technology, often against or without the consent of the gifted individuals.

The concepts used in the story are really cool because Juiceboy manages to make them integral to the story while keeping the plot character-driven (so far, anyway). Not too much has happened in the story yet, those first nine pages, but there's definite momentum building up. It'll be fun to see where he takes it.

When I first read the background information before reading the script, I immediately thought of X-Men, where people gain strange powers as forward evolutionary steps in the human genepool. However, Juiceboy was able to maintain a certain level of originality with the nature of the powers and how they're being dealt with.

My only criticism at this point is the writing itself, but Juiceboy mentioned in an earlier post of his that this was still the draft, so it's a moot point to go on about it.

Give it a gander if you've got the time: http://www.zeros2heroes.com/pitch/546