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May 18
2008

Community: A Question

Posted by Fetternity in writingpitchesHarold Greenberg Fund

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Hey fellers. Ja, I know it looks like I dropped off the face of the planet, which ain't necessarily wrong in a sense, but I have some time right now to spark a debate. Being my usual self, I guess :)

 So you might have heard of this Harold Greenberg Fund thingie. Not-so-long story short, the 12 winners of the first round of C:CCN, armed with their pitches, experiences and wonderful personalities,  have a chance of becoming the single writer chosen to advance his pitch to the feature development level. As in movie? Maybe, probably.

My question to you:

Out of the twelve winning pitches so far:

■ Blake Undying
■ Dawn of Heroes
■ Slaughter Inc.
■ Hero High
■ Rip Current
■ Abigail's War
■ Minus One
■ Deutschmaschine
■ Alma
■ Black Jack O'Breen
■ Mind Crimes
■ November's Song

...which one do you think has the best chances, or you envision as better suited, to win the Harold Greenberg Fund's support?

Shoot. Share. Let's see. Tough question, to be sure: I can't settle on one, myself ;)



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written by Tenzil Kem, May 18, 2008
TK Terminator aka TK Junior says that he wants to see Blake Undying win this contest, no offense to TK Senior. @@@:>
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written by Tenzil Kem, May 18, 2008
TK Terminator says, ''Mommmm! Help!!!!! Can Dad really ground me for five years??? And what does he mean by no PS2, no TV and no internet? Can I change my vote?''
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written by Fetternity, May 18, 2008
My best punishment ever: "Do it or I'll wipe clean your Playstation's memory card/hard drive."

:D
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written by Fetternity, May 18, 2008
I think Blake can work as a fine movie, yes... but as a black comedy, probably not. I think it'd fit better a black-humored drama genre if the audience is to sit through 100 minutes of it.

I also think November's Song, being uniquely Canadian, has a very good head start.... Same with Abigail's War.

Difficult to say, there are so many arguments for a good number of them.
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written by Tenzil Kem, May 18, 2008
Fett, I honestly believe you can make a case for each and every one. Part of the problem, right now, as far as I can see, is that each of the twelve winners only wrote one 22 page comic, and have sometimes given the rest of us a peek at the future storyline, but almost none of us have presented a story that would fit into a film (Will might be the only one who has). This makes it hard to judge how the concept we know would fit into a story to be adapted to a film. I know how I would take one story line from Minus One and turn it into a film, but how and where do I present this? I think we need some goal posts here!
I'm off now to wipe clear a certain PS2 memory card!
Okay, okay, TK Junior, just kidding!
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written by genrewriter, May 18, 2008
Actually, Tenzil, the first Mind Crimes story is very self-contained, as I created it to be a graphic novel or mini-series, so the story would fit perfectly into a film. One way of describing it for film would be to say it's a futuristic version of The Fugitive.

But regardless of the initial intentions and lengths of the stories in our pitches, I'm sure all the winners could take certain key characters and key story elements from their concepts and write a great film. I don't envy the judges their task.

Something I'd be curious to know is if there's a budget limit to the films the fund supports. Most of these comics would need huge effects budgets to be done right.
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written by Fetternity, May 18, 2008
Indeed, my own pitch would be one of those high-budget FX movies. Same with Dawn of Heroes and Rip Current.

Abigail's War has the artistic advantage of being a Canadian period fantasy piece, but tat's also a drawback on the technical side. It's demanding to shoot a period piece.

Now for Slaughter Inc., you need lots of FX and makeup. Easy to acquire but when you need it throughout your whole production it becomes costly and quite demanding.

Honestly, I feel the movies that could be shot with the lowest budget of all those pitches would have to be November's Song and Blake Undying, followed by Hero High. Is that a factor? Well, I guess we'll see!
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written by Yen, May 18, 2008
Ooh... we're talking about this!

Just to put it out there -- my guess is budget wouldn't be too much of a factor for this development round. I think the criteria will be more based on a) story potential as a movie, and b) would the movie actually draw an audience? So... lots of great picks there... though for some reason I think Black Jack O'Breen and Minus One are up there...

I'm just excited because a 1 in 12 shot is about the best odds at development funding any of us have ever seen in this country!



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written by genrewriter, May 18, 2008
Just page X of November's Song looks expensive as a movie scene to me... And Hero High would have expensive super-inspired FX, too, I'd think. Blake Undying could definitely be done on a lower budget, although big explosions and special makeup FX for his gorily detailed demises would make it a more satisfying movie.

But, wow, a 1 in 12 shot at development funding is pretty amazing for any of us, I should think.
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written by Crackwalker, May 19, 2008
Script probably isn't the only thing to be considered. It's not just the story, but the person that is being invested in. It makes sense that a big part of the decision to award development money would have to do with how the individual creators conduct themselves with regards to overall quality and professionalism.

If someone doesn't seem like they have the right stuff, they probably won't get the development deal. They don't want to give the money to a writer and then have them choke and not deliver the goods. I'm sure it happens.

We are essentially a bunch of greenhorns - each of could potentially be an oscar winner - or maybe not. I think inspiring confidence in our ability is going to be key.
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written by genrewriter, May 19, 2008
You're absolutely right, Crackwalker. As it says in the features section, our 'background and pedigree' is going to be a key factor. Otherwise, we wouldn't even have to do a new personal pitch, since our story pitches are already up.
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written by Crackwalker, May 19, 2008
Z2H is in the business of reaching out to new talent - the challenge from their perspective is to find people that they know are ready to make the leap from amateur to pro.

You could have a great idea, but then fall apart when it comes to sitting down at a production meeting and making compromises, or doing interviews with media, or meeting deadlines... etc. Things are very different when suddenly all eyes are on you and it's game time.
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written by Tenzil Kem, May 19, 2008
This is kind of what I was talking about when I mentioned the goalposts above. Not just for how the winner is going to be picked, not just for how we have to go about drumming up support, but what, precisely are they looking for?
Or, does what they are looking for even matter?
If the winner of this is based solely on support from the community and who can get the most votes out does that make this nothing more than a popularity contest?
I hope not and not only because I wouldn't be the winner.
I hope there is some degree of merit and worthiness to the decision of the final winner.
One way or the other, it's going to be something.
And those of you have commented on the odds are so right: we will never have a better chance than this.
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written by Crackwalker, May 19, 2008
Now now Tenzil, don't be modest. You could definitely be prom king. But I don't think they are gonna hand out 15K based solely on the say-so of a handful of internet voters.

I would guess that there's a jury of some kind who have experience with scouting new talent. They'll most likely have key things they're looking for that indicate someone has potential. It's probably not in their interests to reveal that to us, since it would taint the process a bit.

I mean if they say 'we want to see someone with quality x' then all the candidates will start frontin' like they have quality x, and it will be cloud the waters. That doesn't help anyone.

Second guessing and strategizing will only get you so far before it starts to make you paranoid and then you choke.

I think the best approach is to have confidence in your own abilities, and play to your own strengths, whatever they happen to be. If you give it your best shot and don't hold back, then you'll have no regrets.

This is a good opportunity for us, so we each have to make the most of it and take advantage of the exposure. I plan to strut my stuff as much as possible - maybe someone will be impressed by what they see and a new opportunity will come up from outside the Harold Greenburg thing. We don't know who's watching, do we? It's a free intenet, innit?
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written by mariathedreamer, May 20, 2008
Have there been new details posted about this yet? I'd sure like to know the timelines, so I can do some mental prep. Are we talking this summer or... next year?

Plus, I kinda expected that the APTN winners would be added to this mix as well. Would they wait to include winners from CCN3?

Even at 1 in 12, the competition is tough. There's a broad range of 'pedigrees' and talents... I hope the judges are open-minded about the selection and not already pre-attached to specifics.
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written by Fetternity, May 20, 2008
Dylan is right on the money on all accounts - standards are very flexible when it comes to screenwriting, and anybody could be looking at Z2H and find something they like despite who the FUND selects.

1 in 12 is good, but it also sounds like a limited pool to draw from... I really would like more details on this. Are we waiting for the first batch of books to be released? If not, how big a pool of CCN winners will mark the launch of round 2?
Good questions.
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written by mekikas, May 20, 2008
Dawn of Heroes? So that's what they are calling that one now? There I go missing those frakkin memos again...Wait a minute....
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written by genrewriter, May 20, 2008
In his April 5th blog, ChiefZero said that they would be unlocking another campaign for the CCN winners (courtesy of the Harold Greenberg Fund) 'in the next few weeks'...so if things are still on track, this campaign should be starting soon.

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written by Tenzil Kem, May 20, 2008
Crackwalker, I'm not doubtful of my abilities or my story: I know I can write and I know my (expanded) story will make a great film. What I am afraid of is a popularity contest. I hope that what you suggest is correct and that many factors will lead to the winning pitch. I agree that we shouldn't know everything "they" are looking for but it would be nice to know what factors are to be conisdered and how and when we are to let people know how are storyline would go for one film. Right now the 22 page pitch you all see for Minus One is far too short for a feature, and the long term picture is far too large. When and how do I let the community know how I would fill up 90 - 110 minutes of celluloid with my creations? And so on. I also agree that we should not hold back: this is a great chance for us all to shine.
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written by Fetternity, May 20, 2008
Fan-tensity will play a part, but I doubt the Harold Greenberg chairs will blindly follow that thermometer.

I know, for my part, that my first 6-issue story arc with Deutschmaschine (which could and should get a new name and general background for movie producers' sake) would make for an interesting main plot for a movie. Adding subplots, details, background info, all that makes the whole "world" of the movie feel more grounded. If not in reality, then at least in the viewer's mind.

Whoever gets the gold there will have a big job ahead of him, adapting the whole thing into a movie treatment. That's the goal, though: make it interesting, make it challenging, see who's up to it and take it to the next level!
This is a potential job opportunity, after all: you're a winner when you not only get noticed, but do something positive and constructive with your work.
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written by Crackwalker, May 20, 2008
It seems like we all have at least a first story-arc planned out to some degree. 4-6 issues of comic makes for a good sized feature-film story. It's just a matter of working it into the three-act structure.

I don't know if budget is a concern with 'them' right now or not. They may not want a writer to worry about that for the first draft; they may prefer to have your unfiltered vision for the first draft, and then make their own decisions about scaling it down for budget or other production reasons.
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written by Crackwalker, May 20, 2008
As for the popularity contest aspect of all this - there just nothing to be done for it. The Vox Populi has always been fickle, especially when you get a larger voting pool. Someone can be top of the charts one week and then fall out-of-favour the next, for no apparent reason.

For my part, I'm just trying to focus on my work, and enjoy the process as much as possible, and learn as much as I can. So far it's been a blast, and from the sounds of things, most people feel the same way.
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written by WillGibson, May 20, 2008
This is a whole other thing I haven't even been thinking about, honestly. I just wanna get the book made...

But maybe that has to do with me positioning Alma as a book, in the sense that I've never wanted, really, to snip off the first chapter and only have that exist. I've always wanted the full first story to be made. Which, really, is a result of Alma being written as a movie to begin with. I dunno if it's good enough, but it's certainly the right length!

But, yeah, really... I just want to get the book done first. [Not that I'd say no to the good people at the Fund.]
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written by genrewriter, May 20, 2008
Funny thing is, Will, it was your thoughts on this topic in the forums that got me thinking about whether Mind Crimes would transfer easily from comic to film (which I think it would, length-wise, anyway).

But, like you and Crackwalker (and others), I'm not really thinking about this campaign (outside of when I read and respond to blogs and forums) until my comic book is finished.

Unless the campaign starts sooner, of course, in which case I will certainly do my best to convince the good people at the Fund that I have what they're looking for...whatever that happens to be.
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written by mariathedreamer, May 21, 2008
I'd like to think the finished books are going to be a factor in the decision process for the Fund folks. After all, they are, as the Chief has said, a great visual selling tool for our talents as storytellers.
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written by Fetternity, May 21, 2008
Can't wait for those books to start pouring out the floodgates! Cheez, we've been waiting for Blake for ages now.

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