Hello everyone!
First I apologize for my lack of participation in the last month or so. I have been overwhelmed by different projects, the end of semester, getting ready for grad school, etc...
Now, I finally have some free time + a great work schedule, which means I'll have more time to spend here. :) I really want to take advantage of the hiatus to update and revamp my pitch Polarity.
I always swore to myself that I wouldn't push it down people's throat through massive self-promotion in order to win, so I watched its progression as it slowly got people's interest. In the last weeks of the C:CCN, my pitch fluctuated a lot between the top positions of the chart, but never stayed in the #1 slot long enough to win.
It leads me to wonder what people really think of it. I'd really like some constructive feedbacks and honest comments because I really want to improve my pitch and see it produced.
I'm asking you, what does it take to get your vote on my pitch? What do you like/don't you like? Feel free to be honest, either by commenting here or sending me a PM. I'm totally open to any criticism and I don't bite. :)
For those who haven't collected/read it yet, here is the link:
http://www.zeros2heroes.com/pitch/489
Thanks in advance!
Comments
06:47 Sat May 31st, 2008
First off, it seems I am missing tons of info on what's going on around here.... I haven't seen a newsletter in over a month and whatever is going on, maybe I'm missing in the blogs? As for feedback, Ivy, I did send you a PM near the end of the first round, re: Polaris, but didn't get a reply back from you, so I hope got it. Let me know... I do like it.
06:49 Sat May 31st, 2008
I asked about the newsletter the other night and apparently it's on hiatus along with CCCN. I, too, like Polarity and will definitely take a closer look to help you polish it up and make it all shiny!
01:31 Sun Jun 1st, 2008
Mekikas: Cool! I'm really looking forward to your feedbacks. :) I completely understand; I had huge plans for the hiatus as well, including finishing up other scripts. Sadly, I haven't done any of them yet. Maria: I double checked my inbox and I didn't get your PM... :( Only got the comment you left on the pitch. Do you still have that PM in your outbox and if so, could you please try sending it again? Thanks! Tenzil: Thanks! Yes, shiny is good! :)
04:11 Tue Jun 3rd, 2008
Ivy is being sexy, so she can't come to the Internets right now. There. I said it.
04:34 Tue Jun 3rd, 2008
We have to apologize for our lack of participation? Damn, that's gonna take me a while...
07:21 Tue Jun 3rd, 2008
Asclepius? Hey, there used to be this guy on the site who was also named Asclepius! What a coincidence! Do you think he could be related?
08:48 Tue Jun 3rd, 2008
mekikas: No worries... indeed I have tried to catch you but figured you must be busy. I've likewise been more busy than I'd like as of late but we'll hopefully connect sometime within the next week or two. :D Ivy: Good stuff. I remember taking a lot at this one when it first came out but haven't really since then. I'll have to give it another look through when I get the chance. :D Asclepius: He lives! :D
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mekikas
22:46 Fri May 30th, 2008
Hey. Haven't looked at your pitch yet. I had such big plans for the hiatus. Was going to read tons of pitches I hadn't read yet. Was going to add a ton of stuff to the pitches I have up already. Was going to add some more pitches of stuff I have been working on. Was going to work on my collaboration with Bryce more. But those best laid plans just go ascue. Not sure what happened, but I hope to get back and functioning soon. I promise, since you asked, that when I get back to reading pitches, yours will be the first one I check out. oooooh, bet you are all a tingle with anticipation now. Anyway I will try to get you some feedback in the next week or two.