I've been working on a possible pitch that I think would be a great story to tell. It's still a work in progress but I believe that there is enough information here to explain the main concept and vibe of the story.
I would...
I've been working on a possible pitch that I think would be a great story to tell. It's still a work in progress but I believe that there is enough information here to explain the main concept and vibe of the story.
I would really appreciate it if you guys could help me out in giving your personal point of views and sharing your ideas as of where this project could go. Basically I'm at a point here where I need your insights, creative ideas, suggestions and feedback. Help me ! lol :)
I seem to have all these ideas but I can't seem to find the right Time Line for the events. Obviously there's allot of potential in the back-story with the characters that are here before the world is blown to Oblivion.
The more I?m writing about this project, the more I?m finding myself tempted to start a ? Pre-Pitch ? before this one that would eventually lead and blend into the one I have written here.
I personally think that this project has a huge potential that can end up being a huge story spreading across several years in terms of the H.E.R.T.Z Time Line.
Funny as it may sound, where the hell do I start this Epic Journey ?
I was seeing and seriously thinking of doing this in the beginning of the Cyberpunk age. The world is breaking down peace by peace and technology is finding it's wicked ways in society because that's the only thing that the people can hold on to while their world around them doesn't seem right for them anymore.
I got these images in my mind and the texture is amazing but I honestly believe that you guys can contribute to it and add all these different flavors to it.
The way I see it, It doesn't hurt to ask you guys to pitch in some ideas and make this one kick ass world that has substance, back drop story, important life changing events and all those things that makes you go "Wow...that was a F@k!ng wicked book! " after closing the comic.
I guess what I'm saying here is...." The Bars Open Guys "
Cheers!
JC De la Ronde
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13:20 Sun Sep 7th, 2008
Hi Yen,
Thanks a million for suggesting that. I'll do just that in fact. It's going to the "Think Tank" of the H.E.R.T.Z world.
Thanks Yen!
Cheers
JC
14:28 Sun Sep 7th, 2008
I think you can see a lot of pitches that start off in that form. Take my pitch "Forgotten Hero", I had the first bit (the concept... very malformed as it was) in my head but all the backstory et al. didn't exist or really didn't even work. I posted what I had in the PD and the feedback was fantastic that it got to the point where it became something much better then I ever thought.
We'll keep watching for it.
15:42 Sun Sep 7th, 2008
I think the "pre-pitch" idea is great. Have you posted on the site anywhere what ideas, plots, characters, themes, etc. you have so far?
00:29 Mon Sep 8th, 2008
Juiceboy thanks for the support man. I really appreciate it. :)
Asclepius: Yeah I got 3 galleries up on here and a pitch also entitled H.E.R.T.Z.
As for the Pre-Pitch of Hertz, I'm currently working on it. I'll try to post it tonight...at least have it up and running so that you guys can read what I have as far as notes and field of interest that I'd like to exploit more and all that.
02:07 Mon Sep 8th, 2008
alright guys, the Pre-Pitch of H.E.R.T.Z. Is up and running. I'll open up a Blog under the same name for us to start sharing ideas and see where this Beautyful madness leads us LOL.:D:D:
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Yen
12:58 Sun Sep 7th, 2008
Hey JC! If you're starting something really big and are having trouble making decisions even about some of the early conceptual aspects, I think a "Pre-Pitch" is a great idea. Why don't you start a pitch in the Pitch Doctor that is a collection of your ideas so far (i.e. what's at the heart of the story for you, and what are some of the angles you're considering exploring)? Just clearly mark it as a "Pre-Pitch" or whatever, and then come back and write a blog post telling us all it's up and again asking for feedback.
There haven't been too many folks who have asked for feedback on very early-stage stuff, before the details are nailed down at all... I think it would be fun (and hopefully useful to you!) for the community to offer feedback from the beginning.
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