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Rip Current

by mariathedreamer

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  • Rip Current

    • mariathedreamer

    • RATED: E

    • 119 ratings

    Drama / Epic

    Lucia Ribeiro loves her job patrolling the waters surrounding Cascadia, watching over crops and fish

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  • Rip Current - Original Pitch

    • mariathedreamer

    • RATED: PG

    • 62 ratings

    Finding equilibrium in our planet's watery future...

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  • Rip Current - Extra Chapters

    • mariathedreamer

    • RATED: E

    • 5 ratings

    The story continues here...

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Credits

Words from the Creator: When patrol pilot Lucia Ribeiro is rescued by a strange and exotic man, she becomes obsessed with finding him, despite the political ramifications. In this first installment, discover a future earth where the island fortress of Cascadia strives to protect its resources from attacking Cordovan raiders. Join the world of Rip Current! Start by clicking the Rip Current comic tile to read. If you *Become a Fan*, you'll be able to rate the comic, blog about your ideas, share your fan art, invite friends and help *raise the heat*!
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Are you wondering what's in store for Rip Current? Have you been searching this page and/or the blogs for hints as to what I've got planned?

First off, experience has taught me that it's better to know the what the end result needs to be...
Are you wondering what's in store for Rip Current? Have you been searching this page and/or the blogs for hints as to what I've got planned?

First off, experience has taught me that it's better to know the what the end result needs to be before beginning the project. And since I don't actually know what the next step for Rip Current is, I don't want to waste time planning out every possible eventuality in detail. Doesn't make sense to me. A film version would structure differently that a tv series, which would again be different than a game.

However, here's how I'd tackle a few of the possible outcomes...

Movie(s): For a movie, I'd play up the romance and action, put on a time lock to help build suspense, with the end result that Lucia and Trajan get together. Future movies would head into dealing with the larger political issues between the three 'fortresses': the Cascadians, the Cordovans and the underwater Capricians.

TV: For a TV series, I'd weave more of the political intrigue into the mix, and draw out the love triangle with Lucia, Trajan and Marsden so there's be no clear 'win' for Trajan and Lucia. I'd look for a larger story arc over the series, similar to some anime series I enjoy watching, like Full Metal Alchemist, Samaurai 7 or Death Note, or even like Lost.

Comic: A comic, I'd play like the TV series, drawing out the storyline into the epic series I originally concieved.

Graphic Novel: It's be interesting to see Rip Current in a graphic novel format... I'm thinking manga. This story is particularly well suited to this format and I could take my time with the the characters and their reeactions. I'd miss the great colours for Rip Current, but that's what colour covers are for...!

Game: Rip Current would make a cool game, too. I'm thinking a series of objectives to be reached, with the end objective unknown at the beginning -- it would show itself after you've gotten through the early stages and realize how large the problem is. I'd like to see it designed similar to the Nancy Drew games my kids play, where there's a mystery that needs to be figured out, while the character still needs to take care of their 'responsibilities', such as running patrol, where anything can and does happen. The person could play as Lucia, Marsden or maybe even Trajan.

So, there you have it!! Any thoughts/comments on these ideas are more than welcome!!

Top Rated Comment of 4

jmcleod

Fri Oct 10th, 2008 09:52

The TV series with the political intrigue and the drawn out love triangle would make for a great movie trilogy! 

Do you have a fantasy cast for any of your characters?

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Yes, it's true, I did write a blog about the future of Rip Current and how I hadn't plotted every eventuality out for the story and why. That was before I was reminded by Z2H that they really truly needed it, in three-pages of wonderous detail....
Yes, it's true, I did write a blog about the future of Rip Current and how I hadn't plotted every eventuality out for the story and why. That was before I was reminded by Z2H that they really truly needed it, in three-pages of wonderous detail.

And so, this past weekend was spent figuring out and writing a couple of treatments instead of raking leaves, cleaning my house, playing foosball or editing my work-in-progress, a YA novel called Anastasis.

It's ironic, actually, since the weekend before, I had made up a new schedule for myself, noting which days I would work on what -- i.e. Monday, writing; Tuesday, visiting Z2H and my other haunts to read pitches and give crits; Friday, doing some writing business, like blogs, updates and submissions, etc. I figure, to build a career, one must regularly spend time at all the various stages of the process, from creating to selling.

Then, my first week into it, my schedule is already messed up!!

I'm wondering, does anyone else attempt to schedule their 'writing' to this degree? If so, have you been able to maintain it for any length of time?


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Crackwalker

Tue Nov 11th, 2008 15:09

No.

I just aggressively attack my life, and clear as much time as possible every day. Sometimes it works out better than others.

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I've just added a fabulous new pic to my fan art gallery... by Sturstein (check him out here: http://www.zeros2heroes.com/gallery/10)

For those who missed it, there's a new...
I've just added a fabulous new pic to my fan art gallery... by Sturstein (check him out here: http://www.zeros2heroes.com/gallery/10)

For those who missed it, there's a new chapter about Trajan, added to my blog and to the Extra Chapters 'gallery' for lack of a better word, on the Rip Current page.

I am still thinking about putting up some images of the reference art and final character designs, but that may take me a week or so to get the time...

One more thing... I haven't picked who the new extra chapter will be about. If you have a wish, let me know!

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Dry air hacked at Trajan's throat. The heavy coat he still...

Dry air hacked at Trajan's throat. The heavy coat he still wore crushed down on his shoulders, prickling at his skin. But he waited, patiently, no hint of complaint. Even here, it was the easiest path.

 

Oakes hunched back into his dark chair, his own coat tossed over the seat of the only other chair in the room, forcing both Trajan and the woman, Celeste, to stand in attendance. Trajan was used to it, from before. But why a woman would endure such treatment amazed him. 

 

"This isn't working." Oakes rubbed at his temples. "This Trajan creature gets us closer, gets us so that we can actually grab the food, but those Cascadians still seem to be one step ahead. I need results." He forced both hands off his face and through his dark hair. "I need that food."

 

"What of your raider?" Celeste asked, her voice a ripple weaving carefully through jagged stone.

 

"How am I to get him back? The Council refuses to speak to the Cascadians. That would be admitting that they're breaking the treaties; that they've failed Cordova."

 

"The need for food is unending."

 

"Only a bit, only a bit to buy more time... " Oakes battled his scowl, sinking further into himself. "Why can't I get this to work?"

 

Then, suddenly as if awaking, he remembered Trajan. "Get him out of here while I think."

 

Celeste tipped her head forward, acknowledging the command. Her long black hair fell forward over her bare shoulders.  

 

She led Trajan through windowless corridors where sleek walls blended one into the other. He knew they meant to confuse him during this walk, so that he could never be certain of his location, but he'd navigated a maze in his own underwater city in order to escape. This Cordovan city proved far easier. He knew the way from his own room, past Oakes' rooms and to the outside door with the stairs to the barren cove. Beyond that, he had nowhere else to go.

 

The woman, Celeste, stopped in front of the door to his room and unlocked it. She pulled open the door and walked into the room, no longer waiting for him to enter first, as she first had. Trajan followed behind, about five paces, as he had done for all women since infancy. He scowled, pinched his lips into a hard line and cursed himself for being unable to adapt as easily to his new surroundings as this woman had been able to adapt to his own habits.

 

Feeling the heat of anger on his face, Trajan strode past Celeste when she paused, and went straight to the large window. He glared down through the glass onto the barren path below. No glimpse of the sky or of the ocean. This is how they've made it a prison, he thought.

 

He heard Celeste walk towards him, but he refused to turn. She should be forced to follow him, as she did Oakes. She had no power here. She was an object, dressed to show her curves and warm coloured skin, obviously for the pleasure of Oakes. Trajan tightened the prickly coat tighter around his chest. He should treat her as Oakes did.

 

"I have something for you, Trajan," she said quietly, possibly even kindly. But he refused to turn. Not for a woman, not ever again.

 

"Trajan?" Celeste touched his shoulder. He flinched back as if struck, then cursed himself once again. How could he possibly fear her? She was only a servant to Oakes, weaker than all men here.

 

Her hand darted away, to rest near her mouth. "I'm sorry," she said. As if tempted once again to touch him, she reached forward. "I won't hurt you. You don't need to be afraid of me?"

 

Seeing her movement as a reflection in the window, he turned to face her, but stepped out of reach. She dropped her hand to her side, but met his eye. Trajan fought every instinct in order to maintain eye contact and not defer to her.

 

"I'll show you," she said. Softly as a tendril, she moved across the room toward the bathing room. "I know you love your bath," she went on as she walked. "I found some salts for you to add to the water." She disappeared into the other room and returned with a large container. "It's kept under the sink. It should make you more comfortable."

 

Considering the bite of chemicals in their dead, processed water, this gift was extraordinary. Trajan felt a craving build inside him so strongly he could almost taste the salt in his mouth. There must be a price.

 

"What do you want?"

 

"Nothing."

 

Trajan shrank under the coat, grateful for the shield. A gift this personal could not be without conditions. Surely she expects something from him. Something equally personal.

 

Yet she walked straight for the door and let herself out. He heard the door locked from the outside.

 

The container sat on the edge of the sink. She knew he would use it. Sea salts, in large chunky crystals, as she promised. He grabbed a handful and dropped it into the bath and started up the water. As it filled, he pulled off his coat and let it fall to the floor outside the bathing room, shucked the rough pants he wore, closed the door and locked it.

 

Trajan stirred the salts into the water with his arms before easing into the water. His scales lifted from his skin with a content rustling, and his fins eased out from the back of his calves. His bones and body ached in the hard water, but the salts made it tolerable, even pleasurable. He sank into the water, curling onto his side like a child until he was fully submerged, the fin along the back stretching to the side of the bath. Then, he let himself sleep.

Top Rated Comment of 3

Eysic Ach

Mon Oct 20th, 2008 09:40

Good work. I enjoyed it.

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I like your comic and want to know what happens next. I should go read your extra chapters, shouldn't I?
I like your comic and want to know what happens next. I should go read your extra chapters, shouldn't I?

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mariathedreamer

Sat Oct 11th, 2008 00:03

Yes, the extra chapters would be the next place to go... I'm trying to keep adding extra content, so far, from Lucia and Marsden POVs.  Thanks for stopping back!

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Are you wondering what's in store for Rip Current? Have you been searching this page and/or the blogs for hints as to what I've got planned?

First off, experience has taught me that it's better to know the what the end result needs to be...
Are you wondering what's in store for Rip Current? Have you been searching this page and/or the blogs for hints as to what I've got planned?

First off, experience has taught me that it's better to know the what the end result needs to be before beginning the project. And since I don't actually know what the next step for Rip Current is, I don't want to waste time planning out every possible eventuality in detail. Doesn't make sense to me. A film version would structure differently that a tv series, which would again be different than a game.

However, here's how I'd tackle a few of the possible outcomes...

Movie(s): For a movie, I'd play up the romance and action, put on a time lock to help build suspense, with the end result that Lucia and Trajan get together. Future movies would head into dealing with the larger political issues between the three 'fortresses': the Cascadians, the Cordovans and the underwater Capricians.

TV: For a TV series, I'd weave more of the political intrigue into the mix, and draw out the love triangle with Lucia, Trajan and Marsden so there's be no clear 'win' for Trajan and Lucia. I'd look for a larger story arc over the series, similar to some anime series I enjoy watching, like Full Metal Alchemist, Samaurai 7 or Death Note, or even like Lost.

Comic: A comic, I'd play like the TV series, drawing out the storyline into the epic series I originally concieved.

Graphic Novel: It's be interesting to see Rip Current in a graphic novel format... I'm thinking manga. This story is particularly well suited to this format and I could take my time with the the characters and their reeactions. I'd miss the great colours for Rip Current, but that's what colour covers are for...!

Game: Rip Current would make a cool game, too. I'm thinking a series of objectives to be reached, with the end objective unknown at the beginning -- it would show itself after you've gotten through the early stages and realize how large the problem is. I'd like to see it designed similar to the Nancy Drew games my kids play, where there's a mystery that needs to be figured out, while the character still needs to take care of their 'responsibilities', such as running patrol, where anything can and does happen. The person could play as Lucia, Marsden or maybe even Trajan.

So, there you have it!! Any thoughts/comments on these ideas are more than welcome!!

Top Rated Comment of 4

jmcleod

Fri Oct 10th, 2008 09:52

The TV series with the political intrigue and the drawn out love triangle would make for a great movie trilogy! 

Do you have a fantasy cast for any of your characters?

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Nick (genrewriter) already posted the big pic and link to the Coquitlam Now...
Nick (genrewriter) already posted the big pic and link to the Coquitlam Now article, but here's the groovy mini-Nick and mini-Carmen, hanging out on the masthead!

Coquitlam Now masthead

You can't really tell, but they took this at the pier in Port Moody. Heels, planking, and wobbly surfaces gave me new respect for superhero gals in stilettos everywhere... at the photoshoot, the photographer had us balancing on this stingy outcrop of crumbling dock, and I figured one false move would send me into the water. But he definately wanted water going on, and he got the look he wanted in the end -- my daughter took one look at the big pic they used with the feature story and said we looked as though we were under water.

Doing the interview was a bit nerve-wracking -- I kept talking and talking. I figured I said the right kind of things but didn't know how it would all come out. I guess media savvy will be acquired as we all sore to famedom!! Hoo-raw!!

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Tenzil Kem

Thu Oct 9th, 2008 00:57

Hopefully you'll be soaring as well!  Congrats again, to the both of you.  I think you two look great hanging out there on the masthead and everything!  My sister lives out in the...

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Mariathedreamer and I made the news today! We're like famous or something. The Coquitlam Now featured us and our Z2H comcis in their arts and entertainment section. And it's got a super cool picture of us...only you can't really tell it's us, LOL....
Mariathedreamer and I made the news today! We're like famous or something. The Coquitlam Now featured us and our Z2H comcis in their arts and entertainment section. And it's got a super cool picture of us...only you can't really tell it's us, LOL. Check it out:
Mind Crimes and Rip Current creators

There's also a picture of us on the cover of the paper! (But that one's not online.) You can read the article here.

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genrewriter

Wed Oct 8th, 2008 18:27

True, but it's hard finding reliable minions.

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SO! Finding yourself at this Rip Current page and wondering where everything is? Here's a quick run-down...

First off, the comic (most important) is the top tile on the left.

I've done a couple of mini-chapters on what's happening...
SO! Finding yourself at this Rip Current page and wondering where everything is? Here's a quick run-down...

First off, the comic (most important) is the top tile on the left.

I've done a couple of mini-chapters on what's happening just after the comic finishes, and those can be found in the blogs (below) or by clicking on the 'Extra Chapters' tile to the left.

Deliciously wonderful fan art is also on the left; click and peruse.

And for your listening pleasure when reading all these goodies, click and start up the Rip Current playlist, a text link further down on the left.

Want to see how this all started? Check out my 'Original Pitch' - that's the script and comment/feedback process that went on way back at the beginning of this process. You can also read waaay back in the blog pages here to read my panic-stricken blogs, my life imitates art revelations and more.

And if you want even MORE... stick around! Hit the Become a Fan button and join in the fun. More mini-chapters will be added over time.

Thanks for stopping by and come back soon!

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A solid writer. A solid piece of epic sci/fi. Go now and check out Rip Current.
A solid writer. A solid piece of epic sci/fi. Go now and check out Rip Current.

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mariathedreamer

Mon Oct 6th, 2008 22:01

Thanks Mek! I hope some more folks check it out and get swept away by its brilliance.  :)