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Words from the Creator: This is the story of ordinary people suddenly gifted with extraordinary powers and the choices each must make. To make things worse none of them realizes yet that using these powers comes with a price: their very lives. Enter the world of Minus One by clicking on the tile. Sign up as a fan if you liked it, and tell a friend. Heck, tell all your friends!

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Juiceboy, 19:10 Thu Jun 18th, 2009

Minus One Fan Fiction (Property), Minus One,

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Alright... assuming there are no other "hidden" pages out there... after a long, long wait... and after a final false start... finally I have delivered my MOFF entry.  I know it is busy, but that is life.  Enjoy.
Panel 1...
Alright... assuming there are no other "hidden" pages out there... after a long, long wait... and after a final false start... finally I have delivered my MOFF entry.  I know it is busy, but that is life.  Enjoy.

Panel 1 is the full-horizontal width of the page, not very tall.  Panels 2 - 4 on the next row, followed by Panels 5 - 6 are on the next row followed by panels 7 - 8 on the next row.


Panel 1: On the left-side of the panel, we see the boy's head thrust backwards, his eyes wide open as he stares up at the sky, his eyes aglow.  On  the right-side of the panel we see King Killian's head ripped back in the same motion, his deep-set eyes glowing red.  Between the two, crackling bits of energy show that their souls are being transferred from one plane of existence to the other.  

Panel 2: Back to the Hospital, doctors and nurses are trying to force the now manic boy onto his gurney whilst applying restraints.  The boy (now Killian) is thrashing and screaming wildly.

Doctor: Hold him down!  Get 20CCs of Morpheine.  Call a CODE!

Boy/Killian: Let me go!  I... will... not be bound!  

Panel 3: Focus in on Boy/Killian's forearm, we see a strap being applied by one pair of hands and another trying about to prick his skin with a needle.

Nurse (off-panel): Hold him still.

Panel 4: Same panel as before only now the the tip of the needle has snapped from the nurse trying to give it to Boy/Killian.  Killian's physical characteristics have transferred over as well.

Nurse (off-panel): What the...

Panel 5: Pull-back to show Boy/Killian knocking down the doctors and nurses and ripping his restraints from his arms.

Boy/Killian: THIS IS NOT MY WORLD!!!!

Panel 6: Focus on a now crouched over Boy/Killian now keeled over, his eyes glowing a red hue.  We can see that he is being piled on by orderlies trying to restrain him.  There are no borders along this panel, only pale black fading around the sides as Killian loses consciousness.

Boy/Killian (whispering to himself): Not... my... world...

Panel 7: Back to Killian's castle.  Honson is holding a now lifeless Killian in his lap.  Honson is no longer transparent.  He looks down at Killian sadly.  The borders around this panel are black and have faded in from the Panel 6.

Panel 8: Focus in on Killian's face, his eyes are wide-open, human bright-blue eyes.  

Killian/Boy: Davion.

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Autolycan

21:04 Thu Jun 18th, 2009

Awesome! Just awesome. I remember another writer using boys in hospital beds mingling with the Blue/Green people.

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Tenzil Kem

23:22 Thu Jun 18th, 2009

Now THAT was worth the wait!  Well done, Juiceboy, you've certainly raised the stakes!
Now run over next door and tell that MightyGeko that Stan and his deal will just have to wait - he's got a page of MOFF to look forward to!

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jmcleod

23:34 Thu Jun 18th, 2009

Whoo Hoo!

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Asclepius

05:43 Fri Jun 19th, 2009

That was one juicy page!

Didn't Geko move into a tent in the woods?  We might have another wait before seeing the next page go up.

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Atomic Skull

11:29 Fri Jun 19th, 2009

Nice one JB. The action is getting intense (chewing finger nails).

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Tenzil Kem

00:06 Sat Jun 20th, 2009

Paging the Geko!  Geko?  Geko?  Has anyone seen that Geko???

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MightyGeko

15:32 Sat Jun 20th, 2009

Haha, no Asclepius I'm move into the woods next week but that's aside from that point. I'm here TK. I'll read through the current MOFF pages and post mine asap!

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Tenzil Kem

00:43 Sun Jun 21st, 2009

Thanks, Geko!  The clock is ticking!

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Tenzil Kem

23:45 Sun Jun 21st, 2009

TK Jr. writes
And if  there are anymore "Geko" sightings we( Me, myself and I) would very much like to be informed  ;O

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Ivy Crow

09:15 Thu Jun 25th, 2009

YAY!! This is getting very exciting! :) I can't wait to see where it goes next!

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