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• good writer, seems like a nice dude  dumo
• I like zimmy's style  genrewriter
• Any friend of Steven\'s is someone I should probably stay far away from!  Tenzil Kem
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  dumo October 20th 2009 7:49am

  Hey, Zimmy, haven't seen you around here for awhile, just wonderin' how you're doing.
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  dumo October 3rd 2009 9:07pm

  Yo, Zimmy, just thought I'd let you know I added a bunch to "the world" section of my pitch and even 6 pages of script. I'd be happy to know what you think, if you have the time (no pressure).
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  dumo September 29th 2009 10:27am

  hi zimmy thank you for your review as well. you are right about the conan and samurai influences. my computer imploded so i can only work on my pitch at work for the time being, and i want to flesh out the world section before i write any script pages. i will try to keep you posted if you dont mind, as it seems to me you have a lot of experience and i would be grateful for your critique.
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  MightyGeko September 28th 2009 2:49pm

  Thanks for the comments zimmy. I thought the dialogue felt a bit off too but I'm still not sure how to fix that. I may end up having them not be brother and sister. And ya the pacing is slow at first but it's intentional, hopefully it'll pay off with what I have in mind. Again, thanks for your words and any others you have I'd appreciate:)
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  MightyGeko September 1st 2009 8:50pm

  Thanks for reading SLD zimmy!
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  genrewriter August 19th 2009 1:45am

  Hey, I'm glad you liked Pilo--I think I'm going to have a lot of fun with that one. I responded to your comment within the pitch. (Your title suggestion inspired a somewhat similar title idea.)
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  Tenzil Kem August 19th 2009 1:00am

  Thanks for checking out "Repel". I'll take a peek at The Drink in the next few days.